Friday, 22 August 2014

The old brown weatherboards Faded,windows and doors were burnt,wind flew through the windows as the dogs barked.As the wind blew viciously through the timber on the floor.All of the boards had rotted.Then suddenly knocking was heard.


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  1. Hi Edward, I like the way you used descriptive words in your writing and I remember the time my aunties door flew open than her dog was barking for ages. I have a challenge for you. Read your story and see if it makes sense and reply back when you figure it out.

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    1. Hi Daniel i have wound out where it don't make sence

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  2. Sup Edward i like how you made your wrok mack sent next time change your font

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